有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中从句的使用的有点少了。
My school is very good, and have the 3 floor. First floor, hus 5 classroom and 3 teacher's Office, but my classroom be not in. Second floor, hus 3 classroom, one art classroom and one library, I often go to library, I like look book! Third floor, hus 4 classroom, 4 teacher's office, one music classroom and one computer room, and my classroom at from left second. Besides, it have big playground and after the playground. In playground, me can physical education class and play with each other. In after the playground, hus 2 restroom and Plants and flowers. Although that small, however I like my school!