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In contemporary society,airplanes have an increasing population than ever before,but it seems that automobiles play a more important role in nowadays society because they are more convenient for people's activities. As we all know,the inventation of cars changes people's life and which make people's everyday life more convenient ，rich and colorful.while when it comes to airplane,the first reaction of us is quick ,because it shorts the distance and makes the world to be a little village so that we can go anywhere no longer need long time.whereas ,compared to airplanes ,automobiles maybe occur more often in our daily life and we can not leave it everyday.For instance,people drive to work from Monday to Friday but not plane which a useful vehicle for people's tourism rather than everyday's work.
