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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用。
By reviewing history of human race evolution and civilization progress, it's not hard to find that human's civilization has become more and more developed and mature. With a big stride of technical developments, life in future which makes human feel so comfortable and incredible are being expected by us. Even though, not all areas of our life are being developed. In contrast, some of them still haven't some obvious changes even fall behind their initial status. So let's have a common reorganization via some intelligible perspectives. It's familiar to us to hear about one sentence that is technology changes our life. We can deny this reality that advanced technologies truly would have changed our life whatever for living, eating, transports, communication and all technology related areas as we know. For example, technology and science help human to make many great progresses on some historical issues such as medicine. In past, some diseases cannot be treated at all however people did, what people can expect are dread and death. Now advanced medical technologies can kill those diseases that can not be treated before easily and save multitude people's lives. Similar cases can be found easily in our daily life. It is a qualitative change to all of us. We can expect those majority of areas of our life which has been made great progress, but some of them haven't yet as I described in first phase. For example, our environment are getting worse so that the coverage of some places in our earth where people can not live there any more are increasing. Many primitive natures has been detoried by developing of technology as if we would lost our hometown. Human should feel the crisis awareness while they are enjoying their modern life. Though human has been found some planets which are suitable for human's survivals, they are so far from our earth and we can't touch them by our current technologies. So it's impossible to dispose of our earth at current age. How to protect our survivals environments has been become a top urgent research to human race. As my conclusions, I don't think there is a type of hypothesis existing that an absolute making progress, it always comes along with some negative effectives. Human should not only concern about how to make progress and neglect what it'll bring about. The key question is how to make balance between them. Finally, human can take advantage of the progress which has been made to fix the problem which brought about by progress at same time.
