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Have you judged person by what they hear or do? I believe that majority of us had the same experience when the first met. As we had no more things to help us know about others. While it is unwise to judge a person by what they hear and what they do. Seeing is not believe sometimes. It is possible for you to see the part of this situation, which can confuse you what is truth. For example,a foreigner, had bad behavoir but he made a big success in the end. From all of above, we can come a result that we should follow ours hearts rather than eyes and ears.Do not be an unwise person!
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