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Have you judged person by what they hear or do? I believe that majority of us having the same experience when the first met. As we had no more things to help us know about others. However it is unwise to judge a person by what they hear and what they do. Seeing is not truth sometimes. It is possible for you to see the part of the accident, which can confuse you what is truth. For example, a foreigner, had bad behaviour but he made a big success in the end. From all of above, we can come a concluson that we should follow our hearts rather than eyes and ears. Do not be an unwise person!
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