2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Since coming into humanlife,computers are being more and more important in nowadays' life. We surf the internet everday.For the youth,we not only learn the information of the world, but also study online and play computer games at the same time. As for me, I use my computer everyday, and cannot live a normal life without it. It is said that a computer is a good and the best way to know and learn the world. I learn English on some website, which do a great help of my English study. At the end of a semster, I finish my dissertion with some commom but useful software. Besides, it has been admitted that the internet is the most convenient way to connect friends in terms of time and cost. As the proverbs goes,every road leads to the Rome. We can also say that a computer leads to every road. It is a computer that make the earth into a village,and in no way shouldn't we thank a computer.