小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

Me finally welcome a my new teacher! She name is miss Jiang, to serve as we English teacher. She hus long black hair, brown glasses and cherry like mouth, that appear very young and beautiful! She very humor and clever, so we like her class, because her class all very lively and interesting. But she also very strict, so we Love and hate for her. But she also very due diligence, I still like her!