过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
Me finally Look forward to a my new teacher! Her name is miss Jiang, to serve as our English teacher. She has long black hair, brown glasses and cherry like mouth, that appear her very young and beautiful! She very humor and clever, so we like her class, because her class all very lively and interesting. But she also very strict, so we Love and hate for her. But she also very due diligence, I still like her!