文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
< my new teacher > On a cloudless day, I ushered in my new teacher! She walked slowly in front of the classroom, holding a book, before the appearance of the eyebrow tells her calm, calm. A glossy black hair into the eyes, a pair of brown glasses and cherry mouth is very beautiful. She is young. She stepped onto the platform and began her first class. In her humorous self introduction, I learned more about her intelligence, fun, and enthusiasm. She is my new English teacher. I like her!