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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2295
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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To succeed in a job interview, as most of us undergraduates' hope, which plays an almost overwhelmingly essential part in successfully gaining a job, turns out to be a great challenge and an arduous examination for us job-hunters. Therefore, from the point of my view, far more than one factor is making function in the path to the success of job interview, the superior one of which may be equipment in professional knowledge. That's because, to be more frankly, one is in high possibility to fail to be confidence and thus unable to be talk-active without sufficiency of professional knowledge. Besides, exposing your attitude that showing your aristocrat-like behavior and elegant speaking style should never be looked down upon.

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