英语三级B卷作文模拟附范文:拟通知

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Notice We are scheduled to visit Nan Lin farm in Qing Long town on June 20th,2010. The itinerary is as below: 1.Farm office on 8:30 am,the general manager will give us a brief introduction of the farm; 2.Farm visit on 9:30am; 3.Farm-run factory visit on10:30 am; 4.go to the farmers'home for lunch on 11:30 am. For the one who want to visit ,please gather in front of the library on 6:30 am and the bus will start off there on 6:40 am in timely. Please note and thanks