The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should
1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality
2、possible reasons
3、give your comment
You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.
应增加文中从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
From the pictures shown above , we can get that the life expectancy is increasing from 40 years old to 60 years old while as the numbers of infant mortality of per 1000 births is downward from 200 to 100 . what is the relative between these two things ?what reasons maybe lead to these situations?the perhaps reasons are listed as follows. firstly, at the year of 1960s,all the treasures of the country is collected ang distributed average which leads to many families divided too little food to feed each number of the family. morever, the medicine condition is more seriously than the 1990s'. from my perspective,it is that the better life situation and the foundation of our daily life improves makes the changes significance.
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