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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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From the pictures shown above , we can get that the life expectancy is increasing from 40 years old to 60 years old while as the numbers of infant mortality of per 1000 births is downward from 200 to 100 . what is the relative between these two things ?what reasons maybe lead to these situations? Reason can be listed as follows. firstly, at the year of 1960s,all the treasures of the country are collected and distributed average which leads to many families divided too little food to feed up each number of the family. moreover, the medical treatment is more seriously than the 1990s'. from my perspective,it is that the better life situation and the foundation of our daily life improves makes the changes significance.

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