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2012年2月11日托福独立写作真题附参考范文

发布时间:2013-06-06 12:56浏览次数:677
要求:
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Talented people’s leadership is inborn and can't be learned by people.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强。

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Some people believe leadership is inborn,whatever you should do for leadership you will not get the leadership,take an example for leadership 。in political activity some people is becoming the president,as before he maybe as an ordering people,however,one day he get a chance as president,and he do well,he will be admired in the country,maybe for those people leadership is inherited by the parents,we have nothing todo ,don't complaints for us,those situation is limited everybody is like us ,just like saying nopain without gain,you want to get ability youmust work hard to learn。In fact every one is equaility。We don't always look at he will success ,we also look at he pay more work。 In my view of point talented leader is limitec, dontworry about you are one of them,you must work hard you can get this ability。May be some people is very Hanson,some people is like he,some people have an special skill ,it si easy to be admiredby public。In conlusion,I believe leadership is learn by work hard

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