增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;请作者增加词汇丰富度;语言不流畅。
I have a good friend.Many years age, I have know her. She is my best friend. She has long hair. She is more taller than me. Everytime she makes me happy.I love her I want make friend with her forever.Maybe sometime we will leave each other.We will have other friend.Howere, we will renmber