新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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nowadays,there is a bias between adult generations---they should not have entertainments during their daily life and they are ought to work hard, support their family and etc. This is ridiculous,adults also grow from children, they were playing the chess with friends and playing the video game for all night. So, in my opinion, games are as important for adults as they are for children. There are more and more people admit the pressure are unbearable, the pressure can be from their family, their managers and even the society.They are urged to make money for his living and buy one flat for marriage even loan from the bank with high rates. By this circumstance, they should relieve themselves by games. Games are helpful for them to escape from hard pressure and work. Certainly, it doesn't mean that these adults can bury themselves in games ,what they should do is to calm them down and cheer themselves up and encourage themselves face the difficulties directly. On the other hand , elderly are also need games to enjoy the beauty and joy of the life. They can learn how to play the chess or majiang. these activities could exercise their brains and fulfill their lives.