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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。
The world always is wonderful, but life is not. A man comes to the world. It will present some nice things like mothers ’love, friendship. Life likes a god. The god like a child, often joke his children. The god often gives his children some disparate things, lucky or unlucky, so there are so many uncertain matters because. Everyone is not the same. Therefore, diverse people will present different actions when they meet the father’ gift, and even the same one is also different attitudes in different period. Happiness and light-heart always follow with childhood just likes sunshine and flowers with spring.
