小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Jim's family Today,the topic of composition is "Jim's family".And maybe there should have a picture below the topic. It should be a photograph,with Jim and his family in it.And I should write something about Jim,introduce everyone in the photograph,say something about their names,their jobs etc.But there isn't have a picture below or above the topic. So,I need to make up a photograph that Jim and his father,mother,sister,little brother in it.Jim and his sister are students.They are studying in the same school,different grades.Jim's father is a taxi driver.Jim's mother is a housewife,she takes Jim's little brother in her arms in the photo.