2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章词汇表达丰富，若多用高级词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。

Every coin has two sides. Putting all eggs in one basket has both advantages and disadvantages. However,I think that the disadvantage is play more role in relastic. The reason why I said is that we really can't see what will happen in you future,so,if some bad things were happen,you would lose all and fall in down. Maybe somethings looks perfect now,but we should make another plan.