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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I want go to GZ city. At first,I will visit GZ library and eat some cantonese special. I hope to visit tower of GZ in the night. Because my frieds told me that it was very beautiful in the night. thay call it 'Small Pretty Waist' because it look like to Small Pretty Waist. Best wishes! Yours, David
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