2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；简单句偏多了；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

I had a dream of Alice yesterday . she is beautiful girl . I was had follewed him go to wonderland . there have mony kind of flowers . There flowers able to speaking. so many animal flew in the sky freely. I try to fly hardly . but I fail to fly. Alice give me the special silk coat . I flew so high as others after I was had put on the coat. I am so excited . suddenly I was falling , I shouted 'help help' . on this moment I wake up . just a dream I saied.