2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；请注意分段。

as the economic and technology developing,man almost can't work or living without computer.computer play a vital role of the man's life,it make our life more convenient and easy,then it make people out of control in the virtual world. The idea is that if the president uses force abroad, deploys the United States Armed Forces into what is called hostilities under the law, that it triggers a time-clock that he has obviously to report on what he has done, but also, after a certain passage of that clock, bring the people back