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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19638
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

The picture which is given above provided us an interesting thing.Two men both of whom have only one leg are going forward shoulder by shoulder. From the subtitle we can achieve that the cartoon aims at informing us the significance of cooperation.Definitely, no one can deny the importance of it.In company, it will be easier and save much time with the help of our fellows.There is also an old saying goes,working cooperate with a man and a female,you won't feel tired which is also adapt for our daily life. A family feels more happy when numbers of the family cooperate perfectly. For my perspevtive, in this fast secioty, we should do the things more efficiently and fastly during the limited time.therefor, I can conclud that cooperation is one of the best way which can help us achieve that goal.

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