采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
From the table chart given above, we can observe that it describe the statistics of electricity consumption in small city in China. From 2014 to 2006,the figures are almost keepping steady whereas the date raising sharply in 2007. what may lead to this phenomenon?The reasons are listed as follows. Firstly,with the living condition of small cities is aproving, people are not afraid of spending too much money on electricity.Secondly,more and more people who were leaving hometown to work in big cities choose to work at home nowadays.Last but not least,more and more industries which were founded in big cities are moving to small citise where the land's price is cheaper. Accrodingly,as the users of electricity added, the consumption of it will growing fast.So the first thing the government should do is to provided that there have enough electricity to use.
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