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The smartphone is ubiquitous, addictive and transformative. The dawn of the smartphones came from iPhone in 2007. Just 8 years later, the world was occupied by the smartphone. They have become the fastest-selling gadgets in history, and have also penetrated every aspect of daily life. They have changed the world. The transformative power of smartphones comes from their size and connectivity. It is very convenient. However, people have come into a habit to smartphones, so there are some problems or we can say it is a kind of fear like text neck, nomophobia. The greater fear is over privacy. Your information will be exposed to everyone. Believe it or not, three benefits weigh against these threats to privacy. For a start, the autocrats will not have it all their own way. The smartphone will be cheaper and cheaper. More and more people will own one or more smartphones. The government spy on their citizens, also record the brutality of officials and spread information and dissenting opinions. The second benefit is that people can use them to make the world better. The third windfall is economic. They can help economical to develop. Therefore, the smartphones have changed the world. They have advantages and disadvantages.
