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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33541
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

There is no question of being careful with our money in daily life as a student, but in my mind the most important thing is that whether you spend your money happy or not. That is to say, if you buy something a little expensive, and you like it from the bottom of your heart, you do not have to be confused about whether the thing is worthy of buying. Be happy, if you like it. I would like to share my experience with you. I am a student who do not know how to spend money in a long term. I seldom buy something I like because I always consider whether it is worthy of buying, which abates my sense of happiness.Although I can select the cheaper thing to buy and save money, I may not pursue the thing I like very much.One day , I went out with my friend, and bought a coat I preferred so much and I feel the happiness that I have seldom experienced. After that, I found that actually I spent a more expensive prize buying that coat. However, when I reminiscence the happy feeling I got at that time, nothing can dishearten me. From my own experience, I learn that we can be happy if we like it even if it costs you a lot money. In a conclusion, we are students, so it is not a bad thing to learn to save money. However, sometimes we can enjoy our life, and do not trouble yourself if you buy a thing you like just because the thing is a little expensive. Just be happy ,if you like it.

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