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拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
There is no question of being careful with our money in daily life as a student, but in my mind the most important thing is that whether you spend your money happy or not. That is to say, if you buy something a little expensive, and you like it from the bottom of your heart, you do not have to be confused about whether the thing is worthy of buying. Be happy, if you like it. I would like to share my experience with you. I am a student who do not know how to spend money in a long term. I seldom buy something I like because I always consider whether it is worthy of buying, which abates my sense of happiness.Although I can select the cheaper thing to buy and save money, I may not pursue the thing I like very much.One day , I went out with my friend, and bought a coat I preferred so much and I feel the happiness that I have seldom experienced. After that, I found that actually I spent a more expensive prize buying that coat. However, when I reminiscence the happy feeling I got at that time, nothing can dishearten me. From my own experience, I learn that we can be happy if we like it even if it costs you a lot money. In a conclusion, we are students, so it is not a bad thing to learn to save money. However, sometimes we can enjoy our life, and do not trouble yourself if you buy a thing you like just because the thing is a little expensive. Just be happy ,if you like it.