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As an old saying goes that "every coin has two sides".Putting all your eggs in one basket,likely,has both advantages and disadvantages.Yet,in my opinion,the disadvantages of putting your eggs in one basket is far outweigh than its advantages.Thus,it is never too careful to always have a plan B when we cope with important events. Nobody can know what is going to happen in the future.When unexpected accidents happened,you would find yourself in a desperate situation,losing everything you had.Therefore,putting all you have in one thing equals to putting all the risks and pressures together.That’s why we need to think about all the possible risks and to prepare extra plans ahead before we make decisions on important events.In other words,we must have different plans and preparations for fear of undesirable results. In conclusion,it is unadvisable to put all eggs in only one basket.That’s because this may give rise to unaffordable and unexpected consequences which might make you disappointed and annoyed.Therefore,I assert that we should have alternative choices to assure everything goes well.
