小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice sounds good and she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and playing chess. she is also nice to us. She often helps us . My classmates like her very much.