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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

These days there is a general discussion about the issue of judging a person by their appearance. People's opinions differ greatly concerning this phenomenon. Is it wise to judge a person by their appearance? It is definitely not。 There are numerous reasons explaining this phenomenon. First and foremost, although good appearance is helpful to leave others agood impression in the first meeting, kindness and inner thought are the most important to make friends for all life time. Secondly,many facts reflect that some people with charming appearance make no successful events, while others without handsome appearance achieve a lot. Last but not the least, with the development of science and technology, plastic surgery can change one's appearance, so maybe the people with sourness only alter their appearance but not develop their virtue。 Admittedly, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. So people should have more communication with others to find the beauty of their inner thought

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