小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl with long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. She is good at singing and her voice sounds good. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice because she often helps us .Thus, our classmates like her very much.