托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people, in my opnion this is difficult to define which point is right and which point is wrong,because it depends on your habit,and also depends on which is adapt your characteristic. I prefer to be quite because my hobby is listening music and reading, so If there were a lot of people around me,I will feel terrible since they destroy my mood to read, but some people not much care about this, so it is depends on your habit. Some people like living around a lot of people because their characteristc is postiive and like chanllenge, maybe they like living around a lot of people so that they could make more freinds and have more different experiences. Eventually, living in a rural area or living around a lot of people is depends on your inside but not on your substance need.