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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实;作者词汇表达较丰富多样,高级词汇使用较熟练。

用户练习作文:

Some people think area is better than living around a lot of people, in my opinion this is difficult to define which point is right and which point is wrong,because it depends on your habit,and also depends on which adapt characteristic. I prefer to be quite because my hobby is listen to music and reading, If there were a lot of people around me,I will feel terrible since they destroy my mood to read, but some people not much care about this, it depends on your habit. Some people like living around a lot of people because their characteristic is positive and challenge, maybe they like living around a lot of people so that they could make more freinds and more different experiences. Eventually, living in a rural area or living around a lot of people depend on your inside but not on substance need.

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