小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中词汇丰富度不足，拼写检查也要重视。

L am a college student,in the school,L have many friends,but only have three good friends who offen have fun togther with me.They are deng,zhou and yang.Age zhou is a fat,he always eat many food,thus,we like to make fun of zhou because he is so heavy.but he like playing basketball and running.We also like playing basketball and running by his influenced.