小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

可适当增加几条从句；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

I am a college student,in the school,I have many friends,Only having three good friends who often have fun togther with me.They are DengZhou and Yang.Age zhou is a fat,he always eat many food,So we liked to make fun of zhou because he was so heavy.but he liked playing basketball and running.We also liked playing basketball and running by his influenced.