小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I am a college student. In the school, I have many friends,Only having three good friends who often have fun togther with me. They are DengZhou and Yang. Age zhou is a fat, He always eat many food, So we liked to make fun of zhou because he was so heavy. But he liked playing basketball and running. We also liked playing basketball and running by his influence. Deng is mine second good friend, He is a good student, although he is extremaly short. When you see Deng you would feel him is a wretched man, In fact, he didn't like this, he is a extremaly easy to get along with character.