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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36941
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中高级词汇不足。

用户练习作文:

I am a college student. In the school, I have many friends,only having three good friends who often have fun together with me. They are DengZhou and Yang. Age zhou is a fat, He always eats many food, So we liked to make fun of zhou because he was so heavy. Nvertheless he liked playing basketball and running. We also liked playing basketball and running by his influence. Deng is mine second good friend, he is a good student, although he is extremely short. When you see Deng you would feel him is a wretched man, in fact, he didn't like this, he is a extremely easy to get along with character.

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