小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句法方面做得很棒，但是从句不多；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

I am a college scholar. In the school, I have many friends,only having three good friends who often have fun together with me. They are DengZhou and Yang. Age zhou is a fat, he always eats many food, So we liked to make fun of zhou because he was so heavy. Nevertheless he liked playing basketball and running. We also liked playing basketball and running by his influence. Deng is mine second good friend, he is a good student, although he is extremely short. When you see Deng you would feel him is a wretched man, in fact, he didn't like this, he is an extremely easy to get along with character. To my shock, his remember ability quite excellent, he could remember more information from different place.