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leave a mark on the ancient property is a common problem that often being reported in express. Some visitor would like to make the travelling to be very memorable such as leave a mark on the great wall in china. Unfortunately, those marks can cause permanent damage and it is unlawful action in china. Therefore, the management office of The great wall built the fake wall for payable carving. However, some people hold a different view of it as they doubt the real aim of the "protect" is a money scam. I would like to recommend it to everyone and absolutely agree with it. First all, it is a great idea to prevent the culture property suffering from graffiti. It is unrepeatable for those world heritage and it needs a massive labor and great financial challenge for local people. Secondly, visitor purchase some souvenir will benefit the local economy and the income from those trading can be used for heritage maintenance. The last, this practice also teach people about how to protect our world.
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