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A beautiful city in China If my foreign friend come to China, I will take her around my hometown. I'm come from Guang Xi. My hometown is a beautiful city in Guang Xi. First, I'll take her to Cheng Bi Lake. It's a big and beautiful lake. There is fresh air and spectacular scenery. What's more,you can eat local food. In summer, there is a water-sprinkling festival. So many people will go to Cheng Bi lake to experience the festival. You can eat delicious food and have a good time. Second, I'll take her to Yuan Bo Yuan. It's a new place in my hometown. People can experience the different cultures of my hometown. You can appreciate the music and dance with distinctive features. Finally, I'll take her to go shopping. She can buy some local souvenirs to send her family. My hometown is a small city, but there are many interesting places. It's a good city to travel.
