句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;文章上下文衔接自然;作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但拼写方面要再接再厉。
There is a saying goes:"It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket."I can't agree more with the saying.Apparently,if you put all eggs in one basket,once the basket falls into the ground,all the eggs will be broken.Apart from the superficial meaning about the sayng,there are more critical meaning in guilding people's behavior in people's life. You can find a universial princple that wise people alwas invest money in different aspects from most successful businessman.The reason why they do this way lies in the meaning of the saying above.Only consider different risk that may happen can you really succeed in doing something.