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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;作者词汇基本功很好,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

I agree that snap judgement can never be trusted. I have three reasons. First, when meeting some important choices, we often need to think more about that. Snap judgements make us have no time to think calmly. There is an old chinese saying goes that "Think twice before you do." This saying exactly emphasizes the importance of discreet judgement. For me, sometimes I buy something online quickly at night, but when I wake up the next morning, I regret to do that. Second, we all know that everything has its merits and dismerits. We can not only see the surface, but also to see the substance. However, snap judgements may not help us see the substantial aspects. For example, when you see a man in the street, you glance him and find his clothes are ragged. Can you just judge easily that he is homeless? NO. Possibilities are endless. We really have no idea what happened according to snap judgements. Third, we always make some snap judgements because we can't give a certain answer. We are puzzled and confused, so we say something casually. It is obvious that these judgements can't be trusted. Above all, we should really think more before we judge something. Thinking is a present for us, just use and cherish it.

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