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When it comes to the most interesting place in my hometown, the Forbidden City is unquestionably on the top of the list. Firstly, it has a long history, in the past only the emperors can live there and that's the source of the name of Forbidden City. I know you are a sheer Chinese fan, I can guarantee that you'll have a deep understanding of ancient China. What's more, there are also some magnificent buildings and vivid plants there, the scene attracts a great amount of foreigners every year. The Forbidden City has been considered as a famous tourist resort for its human and natural scene. If you come, I'll accompany you and leave you an unforgettable experience.