语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累。
As is known to all of us that concluding conclusions at once when you see something or hear something is not advisable.First,what you see or what you hear may not be true sometimes.If you want to conclude conclusion based on what you see or hear,you must confirm them by yourself.Second,it is concluding conclusions without confirming that makes disunderstanding among people,resulting in their relationship broken.At last,once you conclude conclusion,you have to be responsible for what you conclude.As far as I'm concerned,we are not ought to conclude conclusion as soon as possible after we see or hear something.What we should do is to confirm whether something we see or hear is real.Only in this way can we make truer conclusion.
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