For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
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Nowadays,many people judge other people by their appearence not inner. I think that there are many reasons accounting for it.First,it is the loss of moral education that lots of people have knowledge not good conducts.In the moment,people receive more knowlwdge education than moral education. Second,tradition also results in this situation because old opinions have a great influence on people.many people know how to do by their parents so that they have old opinions.