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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,many people judge other people by their appearance not innerly. I think that there are many reasons accounting for it.First,it is the loss of moral education that lots of people have knowledge not good conducts.In the moment,people receive more knowledge education than moral education. Second,tradition also results in this situation because old opinions have a great influence on people.many people know how to do by their parents so that they have old opinions.

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