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As is known to all of us that deducing conclusions at once when you see something or hear something is not advisable. First, what you see or what you hear may not be true sometimes. Provided that you want to draw a conclusion based on what you see or hear, you must confirm them by yourself. Second, it is reaching decisions without confirming that makes misunderstanding among people, resulting in they breaking up. Last, once you come to a conclusion, you have to be responsible for what you deduce. As far as I'm concerned, we ought not to deduce conclusion as soon as possible after we see or hear something. What we should do is to confirm whether something we see or hear is real. Only in this way can we draw truer conclusions.
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