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作者词汇量偏小，另外文章有些单词拼写错误；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
Lang Lang is a pianist . he is born in China Shen Yan City . he learned piano when he was three years old . he learned music in the America when he was fourteen years old . Up to now , he has given concerts with other musician in different city of the world . he has won a lot of prize . I like his experience and his music . he is a famous musician . his performance is very good . I very enjob It.
