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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
There has long been controversy about the risk of life.I am of the opinion that risk can ever be totally eliminated from any situation and in other words, nothing is completely safe. Each one of us has some risk of life. For some the chance might be remote, while for others it can almost inevitable.When we try some things, there is always the risk that we will not be happy with our choice.For example, we might try a new sport like snowboarding and end up failing down a lot.All of this is another way of saying that nothing we do is completely safe.It should be noted that risks are almost always a matter of probability rather than certainty.It is fair to say that we may be in danger when we are sporting, eating and so on. There are some risks involved, so we should not only try to avoid risks, but also manage risks in a sensible way.By using some common sense in our life, we will reduce the risks we may be running and keep our life flowing easily.
