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As is known to all of us that the more opportunities you have the more choises you can make. So, I think it is unadvisable to put all eggs in one basket. The reasons are as follows. On the one hand, puting all eggs in one basket means you lose more chances to choose what is suitble for you.On the other hand, you will have more risks.In a word, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.