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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力。
I would like to take you a tour to visit my hometown, Wuhan. Wuhan is the one of the largest city in southern-east of China which lies at the lower reach of Long river. The population in Wuhan is about 7 up to 8 million people. The city has formed along the long river and divide into 3 towns by the river, where the First long river bridge link the 3 towns together. Because the climate and geographical layout that the temperature in Wuhan can be rather hot and cold in the summer and winter. Therefore, the best season to touring Wuhan is the spring and autumn. In the history, Wuhan was established when Ming dynasty and there are many ancient building have been maintained since then, such as Yellow crane tower, Ancient lute platform. They are very popular place of interest for some history lovers. Also you can catch the subway to Wuchang district, there are many universities and colleges if you wish to get some information about them. This area is mainly focus on education and attract many experts and students to visit. The subway also can take you to Hanyang and Hankou district where you could enjoy a massive and wonderful shopping experience. I hope you have a nice trip in Wuhan.
